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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)
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| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Rocktation(f): 4:55pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
OAM4J, you must really like yourself oo. You forgot that I've been listed among those whose heart should be won as well. Anyone should be able to tell from my grim poem, dammit!  |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:56pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
OAM4J: I'm not interested in winning ya heart anymore. U try and win mine  As a matter of fact, U have been the one trying to win my heart |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:59pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Ishilove: I'm not much of a poet. Let me try sha The lady and the Poems She loves poems Try as she might Words don't come Her rhymes fail again Again and again Oh! Why do I bother? She asks her brother Will she find the source? Or will she say enough? To try is good To persevere even better Better gets better Till the poems Find in her The best poet ever 2 Likes |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 5:01pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
It's lovely. Tell me it's for me na |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 5:13pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: It's lovely. I no go lie, I love that poem too. By extension, it is for every lady that loves poetry and has problems crafting poems. I was touched by her post and felt like encouraging her. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kpolli(m): 5:14pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: Dedicated to Kpolli See the truth about to unfold See this girl make she make me catch cold Can I get the pin to ur blackberry Tour  I don't need no sweater I don't need no umbrella |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Ishilove: 5:16pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
maclatunji:*sniff. Lips wobble. Wiping eyes* That was . . .beautiful. . . But i'm more of a prose person |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 5:21pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Ishilove: That's just your excuse for giving up on poetry. What makes you think I can't write prose and you poetry? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 5:33pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Rocktation: OAM4J, you must really like yourself oo. You forgot that I've been listed among those whose heart should be won as well. Anyone should be able to tell from my grim poem, dammit! Ok baby let's just try and win each others heart then. But am not good at writing poems o. Maclatunji is good, but I dont want him to win you  Dont cry baby Am here to gladden your heart The one your heart longs for is here at last Smile baby, smile for me And I will carry you to the land you've never been before The land of sweet passion and unforgettable memories 2 Likes |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Ishilove: 5:39pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
maclatunji:I write poetry,but very rarely. I write it only when the muse stirs |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 6:35pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: Why should I try wining your heart again baby, when I have won it already Its not my fault dear, blame cuddlemii that put me up for a prize |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Rocktation(f): 6:51pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
OAM4J:I will cry no more I am willing to try Though my heart tells me that you are a lie He promised thesame Now he's far far away But with you, who knows? I am willing to try. *i'm no poet either--perfect match we must be*  1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SisiKill1: 7:05pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
@ Topic Ehn ehn, so all 'em men claiming macho outside can be poetically inclined like so.  Okay naa!! Who is next?  1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SisiKill1: 7:08pm On Jul 17, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: I'm just doing copy and paste from my diary o.lol Whoa!! NICE!!!!!!!!! 2 Likes |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:38am On Jul 18, 2012 |
BoboYekini: Thank you, I was just goofing around What is hmm about them? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 10:27am On Jul 18, 2012 |
kpolli: Unfortunately, i don't use Tour |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 10:28am On Jul 18, 2012 |
Sisi_Kill: @ Topic No mind dem o. Dem go they form macho |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 10:29am On Jul 18, 2012 |
OAM4J:   |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 10:30am On Jul 18, 2012 |
maclatunji: Abeg, no confuse me na. Which wan is prose n poetry na? U na don start o |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 10:34am On Jul 18, 2012 |
Sisi_Kill: @ Topic Me know one Sisi Who I think isn't a sisi Me thinks she is sassy Cos she wears her grin silly Sisi oh sisi Where have u been Tell me u have been around or to london to see the queen hehehehe Rubbish!!! |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 10:37am On Jul 18, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: It is in the blood now and it is you women that bring out the machismo in us. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 2:27am On Jul 19, 2012 |
Rocktation: If your heart says its a lie then run with my heart For in my heart there is no room for lies Some break promises yet many more keep them life is a risk anyways, so lets risk it together 1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 2:28am On Jul 19, 2012 |
Sisi_Kill: @ Topic Referring thou to me? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 2:32am On Jul 19, 2012 |
Tgirl4real:  |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 2:44am On Jul 19, 2012 |
Where is everybody na? Now that I am about to find a career in poetry Anyways this is is dedicated to the ladies I have already won or about to win their hearts: Tgirl4real, Ileke-idi, Missy b, Rocktation and cuddlemii This thing called love…. Plays the sweetest melody and makes wars to cease Yet can make the strongest weak Blind to wrongs and makes wrongs right Yet can make wisest fool Turns eternity to a moment and moments to eternity Yet can make sweet sour in a moment Beautiful yet dangerous Still I rather risk all to love… for what is life without love? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 2:51am On Jul 19, 2012 |
I didn't get it. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 2:59am On Jul 19, 2012 |
OAM4J: Where is everybody na? Wowwwwww, Did you write this? "Turns eternity to a moment and moment to eternity". . . .that's a strong line. I gotta use that. Thanks. I always feel like poetry is an entryway to the soul. I can't open it on NL lol. . . . again. Wish I could post some here. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 2:59am On Jul 19, 2012 |
PS: Whoa re these other women? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 3:05am On Jul 19, 2012 |
Ileke-IdI: Yeah I wrote it.... open you poetry to me then  |
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